Friday Flash Fiction: Fragments

by | Feb 1, 2008 | Fiction, Free Online Fiction, Friday Flash Fiction, Science Fiction, Science Fiction and Fantasy, Short Stories | 6 comments

This flash fiction piece is now only available through my collection After The Rain.

You’ll find it in the introduction that is really an afterword.

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6 Comments

  1. GLP
    GLP on February 1, 2008 at 4:30 pm

    Interesting. Very evocative imagery. Are the charcoal dandelions nuclear mushroom clouds? I thought so because of the static and the warm dusty wind.

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  2. Neil
    Neil on February 1, 2008 at 5:46 pm

    Thanks GLP. Yep, they be nukes.

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  3. Miladysa
    Miladysa on February 1, 2008 at 8:37 pm

    Awesome! I loved them all! Favourites? :

    “still and unmoving like cold blood”
    “chained in gloss”
    “smudging the sky”

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  4. Justin
    Justin on February 1, 2008 at 9:25 pm

    Brilliant stuff, Neil. A really nice change of pace.

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  5. Neil
    Neil on February 2, 2008 at 3:51 pm

    Thanks Miladysa and Justin. Glad you liked it.

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  6. twilit
    twilit on February 3, 2008 at 2:55 am

    Wow. I really like this. ^ ^

    Reply

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