Friday Flash Fiction: Fragments

Another experiment this week. Hope you like:

Fragments
By Neil Beynon

Watch: scuffed glass on flimsy leather, hands frozen.

Boots: sculpted in shadow, dust gathering in the creases.

Sheet: stains no detergent will shift.

Book: pages half thumbed, half abandoned, spine broken falling open at a folded corner.

Keys: worn metal hanging from decaying metal.

Mug: cracked glaze, half remembered liquid; still and unmoving like cold blood.

Mobile: phone alone on a sea of wood – no signal.

Brush: strands between plastic teeth, a faint familiar smell.

Moment: chained in gloss, imprisoned in glass and wood never to come again.

You: gone.

Horizon: charcoal dandelions blossom on the horizon, smudging the sky.

Listen: nothing noise hisses silently on all channels.

Chest: something presses or the world shifts.

Memory: forget? Never.

Wind: warm, dusty and blowing this way.

Never: not long now.

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  2. Friday Flash Fiction: The Cloud
  3. Friday Flash Fiction: Eyes

6 Responses to Friday Flash Fiction: Fragments

  1. Interesting. Very evocative imagery. Are the charcoal dandelions nuclear mushroom clouds? I thought so because of the static and the warm dusty wind.

  2. Thanks GLP. Yep, they be nukes.

  3. Awesome! I loved them all! Favourites? :

    “still and unmoving like cold blood”
    “chained in gloss”
    “smudging the sky”

  4. Brilliant stuff, Neil. A really nice change of pace.

  5. Thanks Miladysa and Justin. Glad you liked it.

  6. Wow. I really like this. ^ ^

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